All Comments on 'Daddy's good little little'

I really this like poem, very clever, flows from one line to the next without compromising the content of the previous lines. It rhythms very simply, and effortlessly.

The effort put in to tell of a story from start to finish really comes out and easily puts you in the same moment being talked about.

Well done, it was so easy to read unlike a lot poetry, the balance is struck right on how much of the story you're giving out, the length was just right.

to find these rejects so you can dominate them.