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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
you did a nice job with this poem

The first part of it really captured my attention:

she dances

a vision of beauty and grace

only slightly hampered

by the hint of a limp

she says she fell

i have my doubts

faster now

spinning

twirling

i wish she wore a dress

or a long skirt

something to float around her

like in the old movies

ginger rodgers and fred astaire

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