All Comments on '!DARK LOVE'

You have some good phrases in this poem. If I may make one suggestion: you use dark often in this poem, and yes, I realize that is the theme, but you could possibly give that word more impact by using it less. You could replace a couple of darks with shadow or some other synonym.

For example: the shadow demon of the night

Just a suggestion.

Many of your words and phrases are quite commonplace,

but your presentation makes them pleasurable in the basic framework within which you present them.

"skein-nets of trees" is a fresh and delightful image making phrase.

to capture the imagination of dragon dreamers....must keep this one!!!

tis just perfect!!!! smiles/blue

me being the poetic creature i like to think myself loved the flowery flow to this poem. very nice.

HOT! HOT! HOT!

good but not up to old standard. Remember trying

to love two isn't easy to do.

great work! I love the way you use your words. obviously i can't, because i'm not conveying the true feelings i got from reading your words... thoroughly enjoyed it!

Through repeatedly using the word dark this rendering takes on a very haunting and moody feeling. Ethereal in it's beauty!

wait for they to appear, TK U MLJ LV NV

good