All Comments on 'Darkness'

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 13 years ago
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You've got 'darkness' in the title you only need it maybe once more, all the others could be edited out

KobaKobaalmost 13 years ago

I like it! The repetition of darkness emphasizes the loneliness of the present. A good poem.

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