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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
If only time machines existed

You could go study with the bard.

Be aware that what has been well done before becomes trite when redone.

Also be aware that this is the 21st century and not the Elizabethan era.

This stuff might make a farm girl dribble but a me-too female might slap your face

or kick you in your cod piece.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
OF COURSE THE AUTHOR REMEMBERS

his flower power days. TK U MLJ LV NV

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I am a hopeless romantic and a free spirited poet. I was born and raised in the south, fought in the Viet Nam war.