All Comments on 'Deceit'

Loved it for so many reasons

I seem to be a bit dull today - but I don't understand this. The poem starts out sounding universally applicable, and then in the final two stanzas seems to go Game of Thrones or Thor or something I have not read/seen. What's odd is that the first two stanzas reminded me of the Wool series - have you read that? I'm missing the point, and because I do like your work so much normally it is bothering me to miss the point. I know there is a point. Tell me what it is.