All Comments on 'Deconstructing a Triangle'

by LadyAmethyst

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lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

damn, woman, you make it hard. The pain

MsSuckMyLollipopMsSuckMyLollipopover 1 year ago

'We were supposed to be

An all of us'

'But the triangle fell apart'

Sums up the disintigration of the entire relationship, right there. Your words are eloquent; describing perfectly the pain, the fear, the jealousy, even the ownership of 'him' vs his wife. I wish you good fortune as you forge a new path in this relationship.

BlissMaraBlissMaraover 1 year ago

This is simply amazing, Lady A. One of your best. It is raw, and real, and relevant. Your imagery---the gamble, and the geometric dismantling--so tight, so evocative. I will read this again and again.

Paul4playPaul4playover 1 year ago

“With relief

And terror “

Is the end in sight?

So many times we read that the three was stronger than any two.

Is there no way to restore that bond?

Must one woman triumph over the other; Has the mortal wound been inflicted?

Your writing is gut-wrenchingly powerful……

LadyAmethystLadyAmethystover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you all. We are still a we, still a Throuple, but the dynamic is surely shifting. Triangles come in many different shapes. I will continue to write about the shape of ours. Thank you for following our story 💜

TheDokTheDokover 1 year ago

As your relationship evolves you dare to express your emotions in such powerful and yet simple prose whilst the rest of us keep silent . Thank you for giving and sharing.

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