All Comments on 'depth'

I enjoyed this. Very simple but powerful at the same time. Reminded me somewhat of a haiku just extended.

I agree. This is pure and simple, very well written.

I dont think the punctuation you chose helps at all, the ellipses and double hyphen, but that's small stuff. The images and phrasing are very good, in my opinion.

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Nicely done

Sparse and evocative;

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