All Comments on 'Desires Rise'

excellent write, I am becoming a fan of your very poetic poetry <grin

Do I see what I think that I seem to be seeing, or is it my sick imagination? And If I do see what I seem to be seeing, does it mean that that you are a writer who illustrates, or are you a visual artist who uses words or are you both - Whoa!

Seriously, its fun reading (is that the right word here??) about your heightened emotions…

Sparse

Wordiness avoided;

Rhyme fits

Temperature's soaring...

Nothing like a soul on fire to get in touch with your desires.