All Comments on 'Dewdrop'

no good deed

goes unpunished

a field trip

on slippery

tea leaves

and sympathy

long minutes

roll suddenly by

to a neverending ending

tied up beautifly

with a bow

Was is the late hour,

or the cappuccino talking?

Vivid imagery, enjoyed this write.

mentioned in the new poems thread.

here that i'm picking up. very nice imagery indeed. it certainly leaves one hanging on the what if. that's my take....don

understated, consistent

I sort of see it as Master/Slave but the ambiguity (for once) adds to this poems power.

Gets better with re-reading .I get a very clear image of a woman thinking these thoughts.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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