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Two small points ~

Replace glacier with glacial

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ruthlessly edit; cut down to half its size and it'll be more potent. By the mid-point I was wondering if this was ever going to end; it all started sounding the same. You can say too much and lose your reader. Nice sentiments though.

I really like this, if only because I know the feeling all too well. I particularly liked this gem:

"Into your arms and your mouth.

I want to dive into your essence.

You simply amaze me.

You are my forever One."

I agree, however, that cutting it down and playing with the word choice abit could make it even more powerful.

Lovely rendering relating a rocky relationship that in the end is heartwarming in their affection for each other. I loved the last line.

She's just loving her forever man.