by ShelbyBubbles
Well put down. Might this be a start for greater things ? ;)
Nursery rhyme for larger children? LOL
You mean like....Giants? Obese children? lol Nah...This Nursery Rhyme is strictly for Adults. ;)
But every opinion is appreciated, whether you liked it or not. Thanks for reading! :)
I d don't usually like poems, but this one was great! I believe every woman should have her Big Dick and enjoy them at will. In fact, I'd love to watch!
This is very poor stuff but at least consistently third rate.
Thanks to all who have read, voted and/or commented on my first Lit submission!
A special THANK YOU goes out to Carnevil9, whom without the encouragement and motivation, this parody of a poem would never have been written. I eagerly await my next challenge. ;)
(Side note: This poem does not reflect any personal relationships I've had with any man...and "Big Dick" is quite the welcome and accepted member of the party) :)
That was excellent. Obviously you could relate because it was done so well.
This poem is a classic example of the existential dilemma that we all face: do we prefer the perfect yet predictable sex of the mechanical lover? Or the imperfect, yet possibly transcendent, sex of a human paramour? There is probably no one universal answer, but a well crafted piece of poetry like this can help us all distill the issues in our minds and lead us to deeper truths. Bravo!
I think this may be a concern for more than care to admit, there are always choices to be made, and compromises.It was very well written, it flowed along so nicely. It made me happy, it made me sad. Ultimately,I loved it.
I wish more poems here made sense like this one does! 5 stars from me!