All Comments on 'Dimensions Unraveled'

I love the way this reads. It's nice to have another

who sees and feels much like you do. I like this.

I like this spin on 3D/2D world; it's meaningful with shades of blue.

"Entangled but unattached, 1

we forgot to knot the woven yarn.

Someone said expect the cold

Easily unraveled, exposed but not torn."

This put me in mind of Simon and Garfunkel- which is a good thing! Thanks!

I knew there was more here than meets the eye..perhaps remorse? That's the undercurrent I caught....

Entangled but unattached, 1

we forgot to knot the woven yarn.

Perfect beginning lines for a poem. :)

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