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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
I thought it was

simple, to the point, and poignant

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely done

we are all waiting for a sub like you!

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
This seems more of a personal than a poem - but it does scan at least

Try some more varied imagery - what is unique about what you want perhaps - the phrases you've used could me much more interestingly developed were you to do so. Keep on writing. Sweet O.

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