All Comments on 'Door To The Heaven'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ah yes, the vagina is the "Door to Heaven"

and what else is new Bucko? This monumental work might be paired down a bit or scrapped. Oh yes, the line, "When I was between your legs" is absolutely terrible. Be more to the point. Don't act like your dick is the key to the kingdom. Her lack of response indicates she's had far better keys between her legs. Try again dear boy, and try to be less chauvinistic next time.

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