All Comments on 'Down in the Leaves'

100 on strangeness alone, a few typos

You have some great thoughts, and I like the word choice. I think you should do some revising, but of course, it's up to you. The structure could needs some TLC, and you have a few typos that can be easily corrected. Just take your time before you submit. I've done the same so don't feel bad. :)

Thanks for sharing.

All sorts of things to like here! Needs some more work. Still good, though!

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