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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Nicely done.....

....full of longing and ache.

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Dreams

Such fickle things at times, like an image captured in a bubble, look quick before it bursts. I love the phrase

"while morning rays

called us awake

splitting us back in two"....nicely done.

~Merry

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