by The_Fool
Here is where the good poetry lies:
He slips on his composure
Too late to even speak
As she saunters into the halo
Offered by muted streetlights
I'm not sure why, but this poem makes me think of the lyrical synopsis of a scene out of a Neil Gaiman story. Take that as you will, but it's intended as a high compliment.
very sexy and sensual poem. the ability to seduce with words is a gift. and nary a blue word did you utter.
i'd love to quote a favorite line, but there are far too many. suffice it to say, you had me swooning over the description of a strappy shoe. sent shivers right through me. has great appeal to the sensibilites of a clothes horse.
:)