All Comments on 'Dressed to Kill'

by The_Fool

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
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Here is where the good poetry lies:

He slips on his composure

Too late to even speak

As she saunters into the halo

Offered by muted streetlights

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Your poem...

was mentioned in the New Poems Review!

S&D

TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 18 years ago
Sensually

erotic, loved the picture you painted here

thanks for the read

ghost_girlghost_girlabout 18 years ago
purrrrrrrrrrr

"slips on composure" excellent line

loved the whole poem

g_g

impressiveimpressiveabout 18 years ago
So glad you're back!

All is now right with the (uni)verse. *kisses*

~Imp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Yum!

I'm not sure why, but this poem makes me think of the lyrical synopsis of a scene out of a Neil Gaiman story. Take that as you will, but it's intended as a high compliment.

sassynycsassynycalmost 16 years ago
rather hot and bothered

very sexy and sensual poem. the ability to seduce with words is a gift. and nary a blue word did you utter.

i'd love to quote a favorite line, but there are far too many. suffice it to say, you had me swooning over the description of a strappy shoe. sent shivers right through me. has great appeal to the sensibilites of a clothes horse.

:)

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