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first two stanzas nicely written; "for wet with your kisses/I implore'/" didn't sound right, and "then again evermore..." felt like a cliché; nicely done last stanza bringing it back together.

Weave some wonderful words together, I am in agreeance with greenmountaineer on this one here, I often agree with his comments. Thanks for the read

And the beautiful way you put them together.