Drinking McFloat

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Love comes undone | Build high walls to avoid another fall.
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(composed while rhyming lines with Blarch-X of CB)

Oh man,
My mind is all around,
A mess,
A clutter,
You'll surely find.

I cannot,
Concentrate on one,
When love,
Comes to me undone,
It knocked,
Then fucked,
And kept me hanging,
On the rock.

You’d know,
It’s a joke,
When affections’,
Are like frost on a float,
That,
When ice mixes with water,
They sink,
Deep down under.

Then,
You set your eyes,
To a place,
Somewhere nice,
Where emotions,
Are but abstract notions,
And you build your high walls,
To avoid another fall.

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