All Comments on 'dropping into cool'

always something so intense about your erotic writing..

the sparse words...the hint of lust..all come togerher to make me squirm

every time

Thank you

And now for My cold shower

; )

and God said this is a good thing. He must have.

Great erotic poetry.

I'm with Tath on this one: I need a cold shower after this! Well, not WITH Tath.... Scalding rain, Seattle!

Erotic poetry with equal parts playfulness and nerve.

a poem with sexual tension / the gapped phrasing and thought is very well-executed / "that too" -- how does one give those two words power? / you do, somehow

Steamy and dangerous... just like you