All Comments on 'Dust My Broom'

I feel a little too much word play for such a serious

subject. A climax is as near heaven as you can get on this

earth and shouldn't be swept under the rug. Your poem

are cool man.

there is intelligent life here after all,

at least some poems hinting wit <grin>

I have enjoyed your poems, thanks Art~

allergic to dust ,

LOL...

therefor, I keep nothing

dusty.......*grin*

great wordplay !!

-sGp-

I like the extended, very elegant and original imagery, although could not connect the "dust shaped thoughts" with an erotic association.