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jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
damn...

powerful and savage...

well done...

jim : )

oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
slam me...

against the ropes baby!....nice!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Slammed up against the wall

With wanting...

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
I think...

...you know exactly where to put those lips. It was a rhetorical question right?

ty,bd

TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
I agree.

This has some raw power to it. I think the linebreaking could be improved to even further add to the impact, but this is an excellent first poem here.

I especially liked the ending.

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