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by SunSpiderFang

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A STAIN ON THE HEART

is easy to diminish with time and new. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I really liked this...

Not bad for a first poem.. Probably needs some refining but other than that it's good. Maybe be careful that your words don't contradict? Keep working at it, look forward to ur next sub (:

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