All Comments on 'Epitaph of a Late Conversation'

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Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisteralmost 15 years ago
Yes, she will haunt him

But what a comfort her ghost will be - she whom he has treated so carelessly. A lovely poem and thank you for your reference.

DreamyLeerDreamyLeeralmost 15 years ago
nice syntax

this is not a daring poem. please break out of this old moldy shit and at least try. fwiw, id love to see you do something earthshaking. id respect an honest effort at innovation more than this poem. youre sinning against god and your own talent. stop.

Epmd607Epmd607almost 15 years ago
second stanza

has some timing issues. Other than that this poem is almost pure excellence.

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