All Comments on 'Eruption'

by demure101

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DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Rage...

...is the most violent emotion of all, if left unattended.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IN THIS I SEE A STORM OF ALL STORMS

and a volcano erupting on the hill tops TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
at that

must have been a hell of a blow up, overkill, sorry i don't share the others enthusiasm

didn't vote though, may be fear, doubt it

this also doesn't match "bridle broken"

the stench of hair

shrunk to the scalp in the outburst's passion/

one-sided well-being

now i am assuming that this is a blow up of the human kind, passion, anger etc.

if so, nobody said anything? no words?

if not, clean up you have a nice volcano poem.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
A ragin' volcano

Both in nature & a person's emotions !

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