All Comments on 'Etruscan Bones'

leaving what may be considered shallow critique, I enjoyed this very much. It has a timelessness and longing to it that seems to transcend the now.

Good descriptions throughout. Thanks for the read!

Curiouswife

Your poem was mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Tess

Now here is a "journal entry" type submission that can stand on its own as good poetry!

Thanks for the read, Darkmaas.

I read your poem this morning and wondered why it's here. I hope it ends up in other places.

thank you for sharing this with us, we are fortunate--

the ending was so personal, I felt like the whole poem was getting a feel for the characters, so that the last lines could hurt like only people you care for can hurt.

annaswirls

An excellent poem with some raw emotion in the words. Heartfelt...

throughout and i take note. darkmaas, you have a very nice style. as eve says, it does belong elsewhere and you should definitely search the journals for placement. i for one don't always write with a ton of images as i work from a bukowski angle. nevertheless a good job......don

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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