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by daydreamerx

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
who's "they" , Daydreamer ?

Dreams , day-dreams , fantasies ?? nice poem .

oneiriaoneiriaover 10 years ago
Beautiful

You're off to a good start. The poem nicely captures the initial feelings, although the last line made me want additional elucidation of the feelings expressed. Please do continue your poetry writing.

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