All Comments on 'Expectations'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
the Magna Carta of BDSM :

Vanillas will never get it ! high 5-ed , Prof .

todski28todski28over 9 years ago
a lsit poen

Interesting but not but teehere is no room for movement it is a rigid llist that gives a reader not k ch. Feels more like a shopping list to me. Show me how she would do this, make me feel either your domination or her submission, or both. Just some thoughts

Maybe take a look Sr honey adoreds piece on bdsm it is a similar running list poem but it use a good sonic structure and shows her submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Intriguing

I think I like...

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