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Saying what men think

When this sight confronts them;

And the women

Relishing

Sweet torture inflicted.

I think it's cling wrap.

But that just reflects my own aversion to duct tape, that would rip the swirly hair right off anna's nipple!

this poem mentioned on the thread new poem reviews

If you can't fix it with duct tape, it can't be fixed.

and witty

almost defies gravity in itself

good stuff

This is a very fun read, with or without duct tape. =)

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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I tend to agree with the knowlogable clues of both Champagne 1982 and Big Dada. I share your passionate painful memories, as I am sure any man would. That's our lot on this earth, won't have it any other way either.