All Comments on 'Fabulous Feet- Deja Vu'

I have been working on rhyming couplets a lot in the last couple of weeks and yours all read very well. I liked it, however my opinion is the bottom of the poetry pecking order here :-)

avoid rhyming coups

especially avoid awkward constructs for the sake of a rhyme

Held her hand as we did greet

now this

As they were painted like the sun lit sky

Blue? perhaps with a few stray clouds

5ed because of your gracious attitude in a thread

I appreciate the feed back and that's my goal is to improve as you go. When others see your profession then they see potential. I appreciate the comiments and I hope you enjoyed. Thanks