All Comments on 'Faces'

but I disagree with the line "The faces tell nothing, but the eyes tell all."...Both infact tell their own story, the mouth and how the lips are held (does he want to speak/is he mad/is he something else) the mouth can be closed but it may be pulled to one side and dimpling the cheek. Sometimes the mouth and nose maybe tweaked upwards in a 'I don't know appearance' and on and on. Truly reading a person includes the entire body language and not only the eyes, although I have to agree that the eyes do tell so much...Thanks for the fine poem.

This has potential but I see several areas of tweaking, from the line spacing to too much repetition on some words. It can be trimmed down and become more potent. I've done some quick tweaking and am sending you for your consideration just one possible way it could have been done.