All Comments on 'Fantasizing about him...'

a good start, the poetry form really is a good way for you to display your sexual fantasies

i could feel the pace of the poem quicken as you got more into it..

Hey call me simple but I love poetry that I can read and follow it's meaning without having to analyze it. Sure, there are a few minor mistakes, but nothing that the author cannot fix.

Thanks

That is about the most amazing piece I have ever read!! I gotta share it with my man 'cuz I know it will drive him absolutly crazy!!