All Comments on 'Feelings for U'

I'll see how your other submissions today hold up but this, so far, is one of your weaker pieces. The 'U' device doesn't seem to serve much of a purpose, more like a literary smiley face. And "Soon your gone" should probably be, "Soon you're gone" (I know, picky, picky). Prune the distractors and your message comes through stronger.

In a contemplative mood ~ uncertain and unsure of her affections she sighs - turns away.