All Comments on 'filling in the between'

you Cordelia...I just love your poetry...your spacing, allowing for breaths, ( if you dare take one) and the way you choose *just* the right words... always a good read when I click on your poems, always :)

phrasing here, excellent wordplay. Linguistic gymnastics I call it. Very good.

jim :)

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