All Comments on 'Fire'

erotic and enchanting, a wonderful read.

is ablaze with passionate flames throughout. Much enjoyed!

This was a very hot read! One of many of My meltdown favorite lines, "Until his heat rises up into me with molten lava glowing pink through my skin" just leaves Me breathless and glowing pink Myself! You have painted very erotic images in this poem - and My libido knows it <wink>

Vixxx