All Comments on 'First Kiss'

a slow sensual build up of that magical first kiss, excellent piece Jenn, a pleasure to read xxx

thank you J~

your poetry is a delight to read.

sexy is right. ;)

and loved the anxiety as if worried of performance......great job.......don

and the fit was like puzzle pieces..made of chocolate....smiles/blue

great poem ~ it leads nicely into First Fuck!

~Honey

Verse sparse,

the mind completes it;

vividly sharing

a memory

of a first kiss

everlasting

of how passion ignites

from a flicker to a flame,

and explodes within..

wonderfully done...

-sGp-