All Comments on 'First Kiss'

Memories. This poem brought them all back. Hope, love, sadness. Been there. Thank you. Jim.

There are strong perceptions here in this poem.

to the early teen years. if only it had been the other way around....nicely done......don

cute / funny / sad, a poetic moment remembered? Nice write...a spiral descent of poetic layed tail, I meant tale or did I mean words? <cute poetic tale>

Some of the repetitions work better than others. Just for fun, you might want to rewrite this without the repetitions.

A nice write ~ and even in innocence, Sarahs everywhere wield their power...