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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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not bad, despite being disorganised, and forced thyme

but just average

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
dang et

U R sounding like John now...scarry...he could have written this one ...with exception of the catfish.. ...he wants his body cast into the sea...to be recycled too...nice pen...blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A fun piece ~ now let's see what happens;

I've a vision of a last lake for fishermen...

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