All Comments on 'Five and a half letter'

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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Moving, yes.

Poetry, no.

This literally gave me a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes...it's lovely...so very lovely..

~Honey

i'll read more of you.

The ending made the poem. Loved it. Thanks!

Curiouswife

This speaks emotionally withour being mawkish. A definite five,

Tess

you give me tears to start my day? tears that needed to fall like rain.

Thanks!

and the progression is very believable...have you actually lived it?

How can anyone not be moved

by moving writing such as this

and a wish for innocence of bygone days?