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HarryHillHarryHillover 5 years ago
Commend

not comment, last stanza had a cadence I liked 5 for putting it out there.

daweidaweiover 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks HarryHill, for your comment and correction.

Stanza 2: I comment you s/b I commend you

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