All Comments on 'Fog and Mist'

Beautifully written, elegant, endearing. You have a way with words. Your poetry is beyond Literotica so unless you're already published elsewhere, I urge you to publish these poems. This one had a rather melancholy yearning but it's very true to the old-fashioned romantic idea of pining or really wanting someone, and not just for sex. This is marvelous.