All Comments on 'For your beauty'

Such beauty.. Words flow smooth an silky. I want to go there and never return. Such a wonderful place to be. Painted me a picture of a world filled with love and dreams. Loved it.. Keep them coming...~~

blew me away...excellent poem~

but I think the poem is over wordy and loses impact because of it. You might try condensing it by removing undescriptive words, put in some punctuation and check your spelling (heared=heard). Keep writing..