Four Feet Beneath Her Garden

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When read with Johnny B. Good melody...it really seems to go
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She don’t love me in the morning
but the night before
She either loved me then
or she’s a first class whore
But I’ll take it all
and whatever you can bet

She comes and says she loves me
I say then don’t forget


Recall these words that we said
tomorrow morning
but it seems to slip away
every time without a warning

When her clock says it’s a
quarter to five

I gotta leave fast
if I want to stay alive

Some rules are solid but some can drift
Her husband’s at the mill on the graveyard shift
She fucks me like a pony on a merry-go-round

Hubby comes home early I’ll be underground

Alabaster lamp and I fell down hard
felt a thud it was wet sprawled out in the mud
So even now when hubby can’t get a hard-on

She comes to say she love me four feet beneath her garden

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JodieTodayJodieTodayabout 2 months agoAuthor

Holy Cow!!!

I think you just figured out half of my two part Gemini self exactly as far as how I am wired.

I am not kidding either...

The other half of me is striving to improve my soul day by day (NOT "Religion" either) while striving to broaden my "awake" bar-chart day by day. Head on a swivel sort of thing. Crazy times and this is a good outlet (being creative) here.

That there is a "they" trying to stifle us (or worse) is lost on so many. Even looking at current (shit, past couple decades at least) of reducing the arts and literature in the public trough of mass consumption.

Thanks for the comment.

DampKittenDampKittenabout 2 months ago

It has a morbid cuteness. Imaginative and a little forlorn.

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