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by cool_whisper

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TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
I like the thought

But it's expressed in a jumbled way. You're welcoming of death, you're defying death, you're willing giving your last breath but you won't accept the defeat of death. It doesn't sound like an inner struggle, just a thought errantly expressed.

Holding off voting, hoping you rework it.

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