All Comments on 'Frost'

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With this fine write.

Just a couple suggestions - envelope is that thing in which you place a letter - drop the last "e" and you're being wrapped up & enfolded. Tighten up a bit, drop the "me" so it reads,

"Your arms envelop my form

The warmth of your skin electrifies"

I enjoy a good read; you inspired my critiquing mood.

Your poem is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

I really liked that "WORD" <GRIN AND OF COURSE THE POEM. very nice write, bows humble (~_*)