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All Comments on 'GaGa and Strauss'

by LeopoldNicholas

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Loved your poem:

Would have loved to have a stanza on Bob Dylan

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

I like where you take this and how you get it there.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
5 for the title

5 for the thought

some of the words could be reigned in, not rained on, as i.e.

" cartoon sketches illustrating " is a bit of a redundancy, and all the "Worthy"s come off as pedantic.

However, the lead lines of the stanzas are nearly all perfect.

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