All Comments on 'Game On'

I'm not sure if repeating the "ain't" works here, you might want to try a different word. And some of the rhymes sound a bit forced, like sinner and winner. As an exercise, you might want to try re-writing the poem with no rhymes at all, keeping the same sentiments.

I liked this. Playful and fun.

A nice fun read here

about this fool;

being true to form here,

from his money is soon parted.

CUTE AS HELL !

I liked it , alot .....

*winks*

sGp

A fine poem