Going Down

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Cuckold Torture
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What is it
that drives you
into the deep dark corners
of dimly lit hotel rooms
where sultry sounds echo
through paper walls?

Penetrating sounds
that pound, pound, pound
like heavy hammers underground
as you watch me
watch me
going down…
watch me going down on him,
stroking, stroking
your little stem.
What pulls you in
when darkness falls?

He shoves it down my throat again!
Choking, choking
back the tears,
I take it all
and lick his balls
that slap against my chin,

never knowing if or when
he’ll shoot his load;
he’ll dump his load
right where you should have been.

I see you leaning in.
His dick is bigger than your own,
so much bigger!
And had you known,
would you have watched -
watched me sucking on his cock?

Has jealousy turned you into stone?
I read you like a book.
And now, my love,
his seeds are sown –
so, take a look…

The creamy icing on my face,
he left for you.
Just have a taste!
It’s foamy, salty like the sea
that keeps you swimming back to me
through crashing waves
that pound, pound, pound
like heavy hammers underground…

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arisingsirenarisingsiren5 days ago

Our hotel rooms echo from the start,

“Salty like the sea,” my favorite part.

RebRouserRebRouserabout 1 month ago

An excellent poem.

It arouses the Beast in me.

I do love my watching my wife being fucked.

We both know what's in store for her once he has finished.

RebRouserRebRouserabout 2 months ago

You sure know how to shake a man's world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It’s seeing your hunger that I find irresistible. How it wells up till it overwhelms you and allows him to own you. Pulling you down and stripping you as your husband watches. I don’t have a defense against him when he owns my wife.

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 months ago

Just like DampKitten's cuckold,

My cuckold loves to see

His Hot Wife getting well fucked

By a nice big cock (or three!)

Ever since we started this life

Richard's been a willing cuck

And me? I adore being a Hot Wife

I was definitely born to fuck.

I've done it in hotel rooms,

At home, and in the open air

As long as I get a really good fuck,

The location's neither here nor there

But when my date is over,

And all is said and done,

I love going home to my cuckold

With a cunt that's full of cum.

And Richard, my loving cuckold

Is always waiting to eat

The cream pie that I bring him

And his face is a really comfy seat.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Awesome and hot poem…After a long tense day at work there is nothing I would more crave than a deep kiss, sampling the creamy icing, as your tongue is shoved forcefully into my throat..Cucked and owned..

JT

Freudzslip69Freudzslip692 months ago

I’m very impressed with your poem. Vert well done…..and HOT.

JoselynSissyJoselynSissy2 months ago

Oh what I would give to lick the creamy icing off your face.

JodieTodayJodieToday2 months ago

You have a way with words and I'm guessing you've heard that before.

And you turn words into hammers and well describe the nail being struck.

I'm new here (neener neener two weeks before you)) but you are way more prolific and I'd also guess that two kids and RN and life, etc... you must be very organized. I have to wait for, sort of downloads. Not to sound too woo-woo but my creativity is either full on or full off but songs often just show up and end up written on a feed bag.

I will come back and read all your stuff but I have chickens on my deck getting uppity.

PixiehoffPixiehoff3 months ago

You capture something well there - that erotic feeling known only to cuckolds xxxxx

Paul4playPaul4play3 months ago

Love this!

Great to see your unbridled lust and cuckoldry in rhyme.

The fast-paced rhythm and lyricism carry the sexual energy.

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