All Comments on 'Good Advise'

"Advise" and "heeds"

and get those fixed. Because those typos aside, it's an interresting idea, written with both style and wit. "credit karma clicks", I like that.

you'll fix em, it's a minor thing, but the poem is a delight--direct and almost breezy sounding and yet so definite. :)

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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